Activity 1
When I first read the story I was kind of surprised by how random it seemed. This story is unique and kind of strange, so it did not feel the same as if I were reading about politics or a sports event. I think this story could have been improved with more information. The writer did not interview the clerk, which could have added to the story. The story really does not provide much information, which leaves me with questions. I would have liked to know more about why the man went into the store with a gun, and also hear from the clerk. Even though the story could have been better, I think it was short and right to the point, which is something a lot of readers look for. The author did a good job of giving the information in a way that was easy to understand.